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[gwynnega]

It is still rainy in LA, and I have a cold. I think it's the first cold I've had in over a year, though, so I guess I can't complain.

Meanwhile, after much consideration and some experimenting, I think I've decided that the Jo book needs to be in first person instead of close third. Too bad I didn't figure that out awhile back...say, before I started the first draft! However, I don't think it'll be as difficult a fix as going from first to third person. (Eleanor Bell had a chapter in first person that I had to put into third, and that was a tough transformation.) Plus, a lot of words are going to get pitched out entire, and new stuff written. Oh Jo book, the things I do for you...

Comments

[usedtobeljs]

[hugs for the cold, cheers for the rewrite epiphany]

[gwynnega]

Thanks, Lori!

::hugs::

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Hope you feel better soon.

Somehow I thought the Jo Book was already in first person.

[gwynnega]

Thanks--it seems to be a pretty mild cold.

Well, the Jo book should already be in the first person! :-) My previous novel had good reason to be in third--it switched between several characters. But the Jo book is all from Jo's POV...